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Testing out my new macro filters, but not sure how to use them like I want to just yet :) This is the best I could do for now!!

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The white against a purple background "works" for me. I think my preference might have been for white in sharp focus, which everything else out of focus. You have come very, very close to that (to my mind) idea. The left half of the white petals, and the yellow center, in focus does work well.

The white petals do echo the theme "purity." The white writing makes it absolutely clear that it's the white we are to focus on as the expression of purity. And those white petals couldn't be better arranged if they were combed with a brush.

I've never attempted this sort of macro shot myself. I have no idea if it's difficult or not, but I suspect it's difficult. It came out nicely for sure! The fuzzy orange, white, green, blue elements add just the right touch of visual interest without detracting from the foreground.

The overall effect is "soft" rather than "striking." So... this image shows that "purity" can be "soft" but powerful. Nicely done!
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Nice! Love the vibrancy and the bokeh. :thumbsup:

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This is awesome as it is, but if you want a deeper field of focus, try a higher Fstop number, like 16 or 20. You'll need to use your tripod because this will require a slow shutter speed.

Also, using a remote or a 2 second timer helps keep the camera from shaking during the exposure.

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Thank You :)

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My pleasure! :hug:

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Beautiful Sunita... :blowkiss:

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Thank you :hug:

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Wonderful colors! :clap:

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Thanks :D

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Apr 26, 2009, 3:38:40 PM

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